Another composition. I was trying to write a rhyming lyric, here is the out come. An AB-CD-EF verse.
I will tear down the face of heaven and spread it around thy paradise,
I will steal all the stars to release them to roam in thy wake like a thousand fireflies…
The meandering streams of light will wash through the grassy meadows wavering in the wind.
The flood to the the fire, and all in between will merge and slake, when love overflows its brink.
The torments ending when fighting through the tentacles of time and snares of evil fate,
I will find you, your arms, your warmth and lips. And here, again, I wake.
This isn’t really nice or promising, but I couldn’t think of a better twist to it, than making it all a dream that breaks when the fantasy reaches it’s prime. Hope you all like it.
Have a great day ahead. 🙂
Cyril, it is a very beautiful poem, soothing and passionate. You do not have to say what you are trying to do, just write…freely and openly sharing your words…the style does not matter, just be yourself….its a wonderful poem! Blessings to you my sister! Love always!
That poem is amazing, you truly are one talented poet. Thank you for sharing, Cyril, many blessings and much love to you. 🙂
Subhan Zein
Thanks a ton, for such a compliment 🙂 Have a great day ahead…
Pleasure, and you too! 🙂
Don’t underestimate yourself. You are different.
And it was some beautiful stuff. 🙂
Thanks a tonne to you Pranaya 🙂 ^_^